For this week’s student blogging challenge the focus was on leaving quality comments. We were tasked with understanding and identifying what a quality comment should look like. Task 5 of the challenge asked us to go out to other student sites and leave some of our own quality comments.
My first comment was left on Heidi’s About Me post. I chose her page to leave a comment on because I found felt like I was reading my own writing. Our writing styles are similar to each other.
MY COMMENT: Hi, Heidi. My name is Jada. I stumbled upon your account and I’m grateful that I did. I think that we may have a lot in common. For one, we almost have the same writing style. I saw that you included humor into your blog. My favorite sentence was when you wrote, ”I’m also related to a brother,Jaxson,who is engaged with nature”. Whether you meant to or not, this made me giggle. Also, your PS section and reminders helped me tremendously. I was about to go through a whole chaotic process to figure out how to leave a comment. Turns out, all I had to do was keep reading your post. Then, when you said that Beyonce, Justin Bieber, and Drake were your favorite artists, I couldn’t have agreed more. What would be your favorite song from each of them? Mine would be Sorry from Beyonce, Cold Water from Justin, and Controlla from Drake. If you agree or maybe disagree with my choice of songs come and leave me a comment at http://2021cjs.edublogs.org.
For my second comment, I went to Elsa’s About Me post. Her name railed me in as soon as I saw it on the list. Whenever I clicked on her blog, her page was also railing me in.
MY COMMENT: Hello, Elsa. My name is Jada. I have so many things to say. First of all, your home page’s background is amazing. Is that Steven Universe? I don’t know too much about that show but I’d watch it. Second, your “7 Random Facts” post is so relatable. Well, at least for me it is. I kinda find funny that you had to point out how the viola and the violin are two different instruments. To be honest, some people would actually think they were the same. I also relate to how you’re good at drawing but not so much at painting. I’m the exact same way. Drawing in my free time is my favorite thing to do, but when I paint, it comes out as if a five year old could’ve done my work. Lastly, you’re name is pretty peculiar. I’ve never heard of anyone in reality having the name Elsa. You’re special. Speaking of peculiar, have you seen the movie Miss Peregrine’s Home For Peculiar Children? It’s the best Tim Burton film that I have ever watched. Respond back to me at http://2021cjs.edublogs.org if you have or haven’t.
My third comment was on Elisa’s blog. She was a little different from my personality but we had a few things in common. It was interesting to read someone else’s blog that had some different content on it.
MY COMMENT: Hi, Elisa. My name is Jada. I read your blog and your seven random facts about yourself are pretty random. Your first fact is similar to when I was four years old. Even though I didn’t have to pull out my two front teeth, I completely didn’t have any until I was six years old. When Christmas rolled around the corner, my favorite song was “All I Want for Christmas”. Then the awkward phase when my teeth couldn’t decide if they wanted to be fully in or fully out kicked in. Also, why on Earth was your hair blue? Was it fully blue or just the tips? I would never be able to have any other colored hair than what I already have. I find it astonishing that you spoke Danish when you were a toddler. Can you still speak Danish? I’m full Italian but I don’t really speak Italian/Sicilian. I get embarrassed if I do. Then, when I read that you used to be a model I thought of two questions. What age were you and what did you model for? I heard that the modeling industry is really hard to get into. You’re lucky. I know I asked a lot of questions but if you’d want to respond back to me at http://2021cjs.edublogs.org I would be thankful.
Last but not least, I commented on Alicia’s About Me post. Her page looked way better than mine so I knew her writing was going to be good also.
MY COMMENT: Hi, Alicia. My name is Jada. While I was reading your “About Me” post I realized that we have a couple things in common. First, I passed through multiple colors before I landed on my most favorite colors of all: turquoise, grey, white, and teal. I love these colors so much that my room is painted teal on two walls and grey on the other two. I also saw that you like to play basketball and lacrosse, swim, draw, paint, make crafts, and watch Netflix. I like those hobbies too. However, I’m not very good at playing basketball and lacrosse. Instead, I flip my body upside down for fun (gymnastics). By the way, I absolutely love your avatar. I tried to make mine look at least a little bit like me but it just came out as boring and unrealistic. What website did you use? I’d really like to redo mine. Your background is great as well. It looks like you’re a professional at this stuff. If you could give me some tips on how to make my blog look better, come visit me at http://2021cjs.edublogs.org.